Final Project Portfolio: Initial Paper, Revised Draft, Final Draft including Preface
Initial Paper:
Literacy: A Deeper Meaning
When put simply the definition of literacy is the ability to read and write. To me, however, literacy has a much broader definition. There is so much more to reading than just seeing the words on the paper; there is much more to writing than just scribbling words on a page. Being literate through reading and writing isn’t obtained in more ways than the general definition of literacy implies. Literacy is not only the ability to read and write, but also a persons ability to appreciate reading and writing.
Growing up people are usually read to at bedtime by their parents. It is a nightly routine and most children may not even go to bed without a story from mom or dad. Children embrace the reading and seem to love it. The stories told at bedtime seem to be the stories that stick with them the most, the ones they remember for their whole life. This to me, although not matching the technical definition, is literacy. Somehow children are able to connect with the literature being read to them and can recall it years later. This demonstrates an understanding and appreciation that come with the memories of the literature. In Sven Birkerts’ The Gutenberg Elegies he states that reading should be a very personal, introverted experience where only the reader and the literature interact. From my own personal experiences, I can completely disagree with this statement, and with my disagreement I believe I can speak for a majority of young children as well. Birkerts’ says when he reads alone he feels joy and a “wonderful ciphering of thought and sensation”, however; as a child I felt that way when my parents read a story to me.
One story in particular that comes to mind with this topic is when my mother was pregnant with my younger sister. When she found out another baby was on the way she bought a book for me called Mama Moon and read it to me every night. It was a story about a little girl who was expecting a new sibling. Throughout the story the little girl expressed feelings of worry and excitement about the new baby that was coming while the mother always reassured her that even with a new baby her love for her first daughter would never fade away. At that point in my life I could not exactly read all the words of the story by myself, but I remember my mother reading the words to me. Even though I could not completely associate the written text to my mother’s words, different lines from the book always danced around my mind. I understood the feelings and emotions of the little girl in the story and I felt the words that were on the paper. I could relate to it and that gave me the feeling of excitement and joy that Birkerts’ describes. Contrary to Birkerts’ statement, the appreciation that comes with the feelings of being intertwined and enthralled by literature can come through the sharing of literature like parents do with their children and not just through private readings.
Birkerts’ opinion on writing, like reading, is very conventional. He believes that writing is something that is black and white; something that is written for other people to understand and enjoy, but that just is not the case. A writer, to me, is literate when he or she can appreciate what they have written, when they have fully put their emotions into their work. When it comes to writing, many people struggle with expressing themselves or getting their point across on paper. It can be a grueling task. Does it make a person illiterate to not be able to write out complete thoughts or write things with completely accurate spelling, grammar, and punctuation? According to a general definition, maybe. However, in my eyes, if a writer can understand and appreciate what they have created that is all that matters. Many times people tend to write for himself or herself, whether it be in a diary, journal, blog, or what have you. Writing is a form of expression, which is why it does not necessarily have to be understood by everyone. The experience of putting thoughts onto paper is a personal and exciting journey. Although the process of writing may be expressive and enjoyable, one person’s words may not be appreciated or understood by their readers. The lack of understanding or enjoyment from a writer’s work does not make the writer illiterate in any way. If the writer himself can feel and understand his work then he is literate. His literacy stems from his connection with what he has created. In schools all over the world students moan and groan about the literature they are reading; from Shakespeare to Hawthorne. Now, does the inability of the students to understand those older works make the authors illiterate? Absolutely not. Not one person would say that those highly regarded authors are illiterate. In regards to literacy, the outlook we have on those highly regarded authors is the outlook people should have on all writers, simply because they understand their writing. Their connection with their literary creations is what makes them literate, not how much other people connect with it or comprehend it.
Literacy is much more involved and complex than simply knowing how to read and write. The most important part about literacy and being literate is the appreciation that one may or may not have for what they are reading or writing. Appreciation for one’s own work or someone else’s work makes it known that one has taken the time to read or write and attempt to understand or help others understand and that is literacy. The act of going in-depth into a piece of literature opens this figurative door to a whole new level of understanding.
Revised Draft:
Literacy: A Deeper Meaning
When put simply the definition of literacy is the ability to read and write. To me, however, literacy has a much broader definition. There is so much more to reading than just seeing the words on the paper; there is much more to writing than just scribbling words on a page. Being literate through reading and writing isn’t obtained in more ways than the general definition of literacy implies. Literacy is not only the ability to read and write, but also a person’s ability to appreciate reading and writing.
Growing up people are usually read to at bedtime by their parents. It is a nightly routine and most children may not even go to bed without a story from mom or dad. Children embrace the reading and seem to love it. The stories told at bedtime seem to be the stories that stick with them the most, the ones they remember for their whole life. This to me, although not matching the technical definition, is literacy. Somehow children are able to connect with the literature being read to them and can recall it years later. This demonstrates an understanding and appreciation that come with the memories of the literature. In Sven Birkerts’ The Gutenberg Elegies he states that reading should be a very personal, introverted experience where only the reader and the literature interact. From my own personal experiences, I can completely disagree with this statement, and with my disagreement I believe I can speak for a majority of young children as well. Birkerts’ says when he reads alone he feels joy and a “wonderful ciphering of thought and sensation”, however; as a child I felt that way when my parents read a story to me.
One story in particular that comes to mind with this topic is when my mother was pregnant with my younger sister. When she found out another baby was on the way she bought a book for me called Mama Moon and read it to me every night. It was a story about a little girl who was expecting a new sibling. Throughout the story the little girl expressed feelings of worry and excitement about the new baby that was coming while the mother always reassured her that even with a new baby her love for her first daughter would never fade away. At that point in my life I could not exactly read all the words of the story by myself, but I remember my mother reading the words to me. Even though I could not completely associate the written text to my mother’s words, different lines from the book always danced around my mind. I understood the feelings and emotions of the little girl in the story and I felt the words that were on the paper. I could relate to it and that gave me the feeling of excitement and joy that Birkerts’ describes. Contrary to Birkerts’ statement, the appreciation that comes with the feelings of being intertwined and enthralled by literature can come through the sharing of literature like parents do with their children and not just through private readings.
Furthermore, today’s society is experiencing the new trend of electronic texts. Electronic texts range from blog posts to interactive stories. Interactive stories are similar yet very different to physical literature. Similarly, they tell stories, some of which are based off of old literature. For examples, an electronic text I read was called Red Riding Hood, it is an interactive interpretation and twist of the original story Little Red Riding Hood. In the interpreted story the reader must click different parts of the screen to keep the story going. Instead of having text through out the story, it is more of a graphic way of presenting the plotline. This type of literature engages viewers in ways other than reading words off of a page. Clicking through hyperlinks to get through the story engrosses the viewer and gives them a new way to experience and appreciate literature. Similar to being read to by parents, electronic texts are an interactive way to value literature without physically reading texts.
Birkerts’ opinion on writing, like reading, is very conventional. He believes that writing is something that is black and white; something that is written for other people to understand and enjoy, but that just is not the case. A writer, to me, is literate when he or she can appreciate what they have written, when they have fully put their emotions into their work. When it comes to writing, many people struggle with expressing themselves or getting their point across on paper. It can be a grueling task. Does it make a person illiterate to not be able to write out complete thoughts or write things with completely accurate spelling, grammar, and punctuation? According to a general definition, maybe. However, in my eyes, if a writer can understand and appreciate what they have created that is all that matters. Many times people tend to write for himself or herself, whether it be in a diary, journal, blog, or what have you. Writing is a form of expression, which is why it does not necessarily have to be understood by everyone. The experience of putting thoughts onto paper is a personal and exciting journey. Although the process of writing may be expressive and enjoyable, one person’s words may not be appreciated or understood by their readers. The lack of understanding or enjoyment from a writer’s work does not make the writer illiterate in any way. If the writer himself can feel and understand his work then he is literate. His literacy stems from his connection with what he has created. In schools all over the world students moan and groan about the literature they are reading; from Shakespeare to Hawthorne. Now, does the inability of the students to understand those older works make the authors illiterate? Absolutely not. Not one person would say that those highly regarded authors are illiterate. In regards to literacy, the outlook we have on those highly regarded authors is the outlook ‘people should have on all writers, simply because they understand their writing. Their connection with their literary creations is what makes them literate, not how much other people connect with it or comprehend it.
Literacy is much more involved and complex than simply knowing how to read and write. The most important part about literacy and being literate is the appreciation that one may or may not have for what they are reading or writing. Appreciation for one’s own work or someone else’s work makes it known that one has taken the time to read or write and attempt to understand or help others understand and that is literacy. The act of going in-depth into a piece of literature opens this figurative door to a whole new level of understanding.
Final Draft: including Preface, Self Reflection, and Honor Code:
Preface:
My paper, Literacy: A Deeper Meaning, is about the appreciation of literature being the focus of what makes a person literate instead of their ability to read and write. In this paper I discuss the appreciation of literature through reading aloud with others and interactive texts. Both are ways a person can embrace a story, understand it, and then choose to appreciate it or not. When it comes to writing a similar opinion applies as well. One does not necessarily need to write correctly or fluidly for it to be appreciated. If a person can understand their writing and appreciate it then they are literate. Just because not everyone can understand another’s writing does not mean that it does not mean something to someone else or is not appreciated by someone else. One thing I tried to focus on in this paper was supporting detail and a counter argument. I used personal experience and quotes as supporting detail in my paper. For my counter argument I decided to put that before my opinions so that I could reference my counter argument in the future paragraphs. I really believe that the changes I made to my initial work has enhanced the overall outcome of my paper.
Self Reflection: In this paper I discuss what I think literacy means. I argue that it is not just the ability to read and write, but the ability to appreciate literature and the creation of literature. In my paper I tried to use personal experience and electronic texts to support my opinion and I believe it made my paper much better, I think I have worked on incorporating more quotes and textual evidence to support my argument. I think I have improved on forwarding as well as supporting my ideas.
Emelie Farrington
Dr. Meehan
Literature and Composition
December 9, 2014
Literacy: A Deeper Meaning
When put simply the definition of literacy is the ability to read and write. To me, however, literacy has a much broader definition. There is so much more to reading than just seeing the words on the paper; there is much more to writing than just scribbling words on a page. Being literate through reading and writing is not obtained in more ways than the general definition of literacy implies. Author Sven Birkerts agrees with the general definition literacy, however I believe literacy is not only the ability to read and write, but also a person’s ability to appreciate reading and writing.
Birkerts’ idea of literacy is the ability to read and write. His viewpoint is not completely invalid though, seeing that the general definition of literacy matches his. He believes that one must have personal experiences with his or her readings and compositions. His opinion stems from a lifetime of introverted experiences with literature. Although this is not exactly a wrong standpoint it is a very narrow one. There are numerous ways for people to appreciate literature besides reading .
Growing up people are usually read to at bedtime by their parents. It is a nightly routine and most children may not even go to bed without a story from mom or dad. Children embrace the reading and seem to love it. The stories told at bedtime seem to be the stories that stick with them the most, the ones they remember for their whole life. This to me, although not matching the technical definition, is literacy. Somehow children are able to connect with the literature being read to them and can recall it years later. This demonstrates an understanding and appreciation that come with the memories of the literature. In Sven Birkerts’ The Gutenberg Elegies he states that reading should be a very personal, introverted experience where only the reader and the literature interact. From my own personal experiences, I can completely disagree with this statement, and with my disagreement I believe I can speak for a majority of young children as well. Birkerts’ says when he reads alone he feels joy and a “wonderful ciphering of thought and sensation”, however; as a child I felt that way when my parents read a story to me.
One story in particular that comes to mind with this topic is when my mother was pregnant with my younger sister. When she found out another baby was on the way she bought a book for me called Mama Moon and read it to me every night. It was a story about a little girl who was expecting a new sibling. Throughout the story the little girl expressed feelings of worry and excitement about the new baby that was coming while the mother always reassured her that even with a new baby her love for her first daughter would never fade away. At that point in my life I could not exactly read all the words of the story by myself, but I remember my mother reading the words to me. Even though I could not completely associate the written text to my mother’s words, different lines from the book always danced around my mind. I understood the feelings and emotions of the little girl in the story and I felt the words that were on the paper. I could relate to it and that gave me the feeling of excitement and joy that Birkerts’ describes. Contrary to Birkerts’ statement, the appreciation that comes with the feelings of being intertwined and enthralled by literature can come through the sharing of literature like parents do with their children and not just through private readings.
Furthermore, today’s society is experiencing the new trend of electronic reading. Birkerts’ states that the “advent of the computer and the astonishingly sophistication achieved by our electronic communications media have together turned a range of isolated changes into something systemic.” This is very much true and has truly effected the way people look at literature. The internet has evolved and given us new ways to appreciate literature. One of them is electronic texts. Interactive stories are a form of electronic text that is changing the way people approach literature. Interactive stories are similar yet very different to physical literature. Similarly, they tell stories, some of which are based off of old literature. For example, an electronic text I read was called Red Riding Hood, it is an interactive interpretation and twist of the original story Little Red Riding Hood. In the interpreted story the reader must click different parts of the screen to keep the story going. Instead of having text through out the story, it is more of a graphic way of presenting the plotline. This type of literature engages viewers in ways other than reading words off of a page. Clicking through hyperlinks to get through the story engrosses the viewer and gives them a new way to experience and appreciate literature. Similar to being read to by parents, electronic texts are an interactive way to value literature without physically reading texts.
Not everyone learns or interprets things the same way. Interactive texts allow people who are more visual or collaborative learners to enjoy literature as much as a textual learner would. Seeing that many people who struggle with reading usually ignore books all together, which is why interactive stories are such a great way for people who do not read to still have the same exciting experience as a reader would. Interactive stories open doors for people who are not strong or capable readers to enter the world of literature by relaying a story to them in a way that they can understand and relate to. It is a way for them to embrace and appreciate a story without struggling through the words of a book.
Birkerts’ opinion on writing, like reading, is very conventional. He believes that writing is something that is black and white; something that is written for other people to understand and enjoy, but that just is not the case. A writer, to me, is literate when he or she can appreciate what they have written, when they have fully put their emotions into their work. When it comes to writing, many people struggle with expressing themselves or getting their point across on paper. It can be a grueling task. Does it make a person illiterate to not be able to write out complete thoughts or write things with completely accurate spelling, grammar, and punctuation? According to a general definition, maybe. However, in my eyes, if a writer can understand and appreciate what they have created that is all that matters. Many times people tend to write for himself or herself, whether it be in a diary, journal, blog, or what have you. Writing is a form of expression, which is why it does not necessarily have to be understood by everyone. The experience of putting thoughts onto paper is a personal and exciting journey. Although the process of writing may be expressive and enjoyable, one person’s words may not be appreciated or understood by their readers. The lack of understanding or enjoyment from a writer’s work does not make the writer illiterate in any way. If the writer himself can feel and understand his work then he is literate. His literacy stems from his connection with what he has created. In schools all over the world students moan and groan about the literature they are reading; from Shakespeare to Hawthorne. Now, does the inability of the students to understand those older works make the authors illiterate? Absolutely not. Not one person would say that those highly regarded authors are illiterate. In regards to literacy, the outlook we have on those highly regarded authors is the outlook ‘people should have on all writers, simply because they understand their writing. Their connection with their literary creations is what makes them literate, not how much other people connect with it or comprehend it. When children first learn how to write they are prone to make mistakes. Their writing is riddled with spelling and grammatical errors, but that does not mean that they do not understand what they are writing. Even young children are literate. They can write sentences, fully aware of what they are writing, look back on it and be proud of what they wrote. The appreciation of one’s own writing, although it may not necessarily be generally considered correct, is what makes someone literate when it comes to writing. This does not just apply to children wither. This applies to everyone who attempts to write. If one can understand and admire his or her own work then in my eyes they are considered literate.
Literacy is much more involved than simply knowing how to read and write. The most important part about literacy and being literate is the appreciation that one may or may not have for what they are reading or writing. Appreciation for one’s own work or someone else’s work makes it known that one has taken the time to read or write and attempt to understand or help others understand, that is literacy. The act of going in-depth into a piece of literature opens this figurative door to a whole new level of understanding.
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Works Cited
Birkerts, Sven. The Gutenberg Elegies: The Fate of Reading in an Electronic Age. Boston: Faber and Faber, 1994. Print.